Gross Domestic Product in the UK
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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000
The bar chart presents percentage comparisons between gross domestic products generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
ReplyDeleteOverall, it can be seen that mostly every year the amount of percentage was increased by both products. However, there are similarities and differences in a growth rate.
At the outset of the period, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 per cent of GDP while IT took a total of 6. Over the next four years products had the same contrast but at a higher level. At the middle of the period IT marginally dropped down though it didn’t loose the primacy. Nevertheless, this kind of products had shot up by the 2000, when the Service Industry stayed barely at the same level.
From the beginning to the end IT remained at a higher rate throughout the time, whereas Service Industry stayed at a lower one.
The answer meets the requirements of the task. The intro explains what the graph is about and gives an overview of the main points. The body paragraphs are oredered logically and clearly. The correct tense - the past - is used. The conclusion summarises the whole tendency.
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The bar chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Comparison takes place between gross domestic product from IT and Service Industry of the UK.
ReplyDeleteIn 1992, the percentage of IT industry was 6 percent of GDP, while the service Industry accounted for 4 percent of the UK's GDP. Over the next 4 years, the percentage of both areas rose up to the region of 7-8 percent.
Over the course of 8 years, the scales of two components have risen and growth values were completely different. On the other hand, IT had a negative figure in 1996, while the percentage of service increased slightly. Over the course of 8 years, the percentage of service Industry has doubled.
The bar chart presents us grouth of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. The table shows us in percentages. Generally,it seems that the figures of IT and Service Industry rise gradually,but the IT increase steadily throughout the whole time.
ReplyDeleteIn 1992 , the service industry hit 4 percent,while the percentage of IT reached 6 percent. A little later,the components practically have no differences,it flactuate between 6 and 8 percent. By 1996 the IT descend,but not significantly,it was a mere than 8 percent. Nevertheless,the IT grew up sharply,and reached a pick in 2000,the percentage took a little more than 14 percent,while the service industry rose slightly. To sum up, by 2000,it was approximately 8 percent.
Thus,the bar chart shows us,that the GDP of IT rise considerably over a period,while the Service Industry stay nearly the same for the whole time.
The bar chart presents us growth of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. The table shows us the data in percentages. Generally, it seems that the figures of IT and Service Industry rise gradually, but the IT increases steadily throughout the whole time.
DeleteIn 1992 , the service industry hit 4 percent, while the percentage of IT reached 6 percent. Within the period of 1994 the components practically had no differences, it fluctuated between 6 and 8 percent. By 1996 the IT descended, but not significantly, it was a mere than 8 percent. Nevertheless, from 1996 to 2000 the GDP of IT grew up sharply and reached its pick in 2000, the percentage took a little more than 14 percent, while the service industry profit rose slightly. To sum up, by 2000, it was approximately 8 percent.
Overall ,the bar chart shows, that the GDP of IT rose considerably over a period, while the Service Industry stayed nearly the same for the whole time.
The bar chat presents information about GDP in the period from 1992 to 2000 in the UK. The graph shows comparison between IT and Service Industry.
ReplyDeleteOverall, in 1992 the gap between the two sectors was approximately 2 per cent, namely 4 per cent for the Service Industry and 6 per cent for IT Field. The following year, in 1994, there was a significant rise for both groups under consideration (slightly above 8,1 per cent for IT and 7 per cent for Service industry). However, in 1996, the numbers for the IT Sector dropped from 8.1 per cent to 7.9 per cent, while the Service Industry grew to 7.5 per cent. In the following 4 years, the figures for the IT indicates surges to incredible peaks: from 7.9 per cent in 1996 to 15 per cent in 2000, while the numbers for the Service Industry increased gradually to 8.1 per cent.
Summing up, we can see that the IT Industry had remarkable grown from 1996 to 2000, unlike the Service Sector. Anyway, in 1996, the IT Industry experienced a slight decline, unlike the Service Field whose growth saw throughout the entire period.
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Good job! The essay has a clear structure, all the ideas are fully explained, all the data is used. Pay more attention to the usage of tenses (Past Simple) and articles.
DeleteThe bar chat presents information about GDP in the period from 1992 to 2000 in the UK. The graph shows the comparison between IT and Service Industry.
Overall, in 1992 the gap between the two sectors was approximately 2 per cent, namely 4 percent for the Service Industry and 6 per cent for IT Field. The following year, in 1994, there was a significant rise for both groups under consideration (slightly above 8, 1 percent for IT and 7 per cent for Service industry). However, in 1996, the numbers for the IT Sector dropped from 8. 1 percent to 7. 9 percent, while the Service Industry grew to 7. 5 percent. In the following 4 years, the figures for the IT indicated surges to incredible peaks: from 7. 9 percent in 1996 to 15 percent in 2000, while the numbers for the Service Industry increased gradually to 8. 1 percent.
Summing up, we can see that the IT Industry had a remarkable growth from 1996 to 2000, unlike the Service Sector. Anyway, in 1996, the IT Industry experienced a slight decline, unlike the Service Field whose rise was seen throughout the entire period.