Holiday Leisure Activities
1. What are some common activities that people enjoy while on holiday? Why do you think these activities vary by country or culture?
2. Based on your knowledge of different cultures, which nationality do you think would likely spend more time at the beach? Which would possibly prefer reading? Why?
3. What do you think are some important factors that could influence how much time tourists spend on different activities while on holiday?
4. If you were to travel to a foreign country, which activity would you prioritize (beach, visiting attractions, reading)? Why?
5. Have you ever seen or analyzed a bar chart before? What do you think makes a bar chart effective for displaying information?
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
1. What were the main findings regarding how much time tourists from different countries spent on various activities while on holiday in Greece?
2. Which group of tourists spent the most time reading, and how did this compare to the time spent by other nationalities on the beach and visiting attractions?
3. Why do you think Chinese tourists spent significantly more time reading books compared to the Turkish and Brazilian tourists?
4. Based on the information provided in the essay, what conclusions can you draw about the holiday preferences of American and Turkish tourists compared to Brazilian and Chinese tourists?
5. How does this data on tourist activities enhance your understanding of cultural differences in leisure activities? What insights did you gain about the lifestyles and preferences of people from these four countries?
The bar chart presents the amount of hours every day which Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian people provide during the holiday in Greece in August 2019. The holiday activities were going to the beach, reading and visiting different sites.
ReplyDeleteOverall, we can see that the highest point was hit by Chinese people reading books eight hours a day. Also by Brazilian people spending six hours at the beach. The lowest point was hit by Chinese people again, visiting places one hour a day.
As for similarities, both Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent four hours a day reading books, whereas American groups spent one more hour. The same about Turkish and American people. They spent the total amount of three hours a day visiting places, while Brazilian people spent one hour less.
Well-done, but the volume of your essay should be a bit bigger. Don't forget about the order of the words in the sentence and the structure of the sentence. Use more linking words!
ReplyDeleteThe bar chart presents the amount of hours * which Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian people *entertain themselves during the holiday in Greece in August 2019. The holiday activities were going to the beach, reading and visiting different sites.
Overall, we can see that the highest point was hit by Chinese people reading books * that took up eight hours a day. Another activity which is extremely popular among Brazilian people is lying on the beach for six hours. The lowest point was hit by Chinese people again, visiting places for one hour a day.
As for similarities, both Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent four hours a day reading books, whereas American groups spent an hour more on this activity than two nations mentioned above. The same can be assumed about Turkish and American people. They spent the total amount of three hours a day visiting places, while Brazilian people went sightseeing one hour less.
To begin with, I'd like to say, that the bar chart shows us how tourists from foreign countries spend their time on vacation in Greece in August 2019. In addition to, there are three kind of relax :going to the beach,reading books and visiting places.
ReplyDeleteGenerally ,the most part takes reading books,while the least part takes visiting places. Thus,the Chinese tourists reach a pick of reading books,they spend about eight hours per day while the Brazilian and Turkish groups spend their own time of reading books twice smaller. Nevertheless,the bar chart presents us,that the Brazilian tourists attend beach more often than other tourists,they spent about six hours per day.
Approximately the American and the Turkish tourists spent the same amount of time by visiting sites. In comparison with the Chinese tourists,they spent a little amount of visiting places.The Brazilian tourist spent nearly the same time of visiting places,but a little more than Chinese group.
The bar chart provides information about the amount of time each day that tourists from four various countries spent doing activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.Their activities include going to the beach,reading books and visiting different places.
ReplyDeleteOverall,the tourists spent the most of their time reading books and the least time they spent visiting places.
The Chinese tourists spent the longest reading books with eight hours per day.On the contrary,the Turkish and American tourists spent the least time reading with four hours per day.And the Americans spent the average time reading books.
The Brazilians spent the longest at the beach with a total of six hours while The Chinese spent at the beach one hour a day.The American and Turkish tourists spent almost the same amount of time at the beach with only difference in one hour.
The American and Turkish tourists spent the same amount of hours visiting places with a total of 3 hours whereas the Chinese visit places only one hour per day.
The bar chat provides information about the amount of hours every day that people from four various countries spent doing activities while they were on vacation in Greece in August 2019. We are talking about several entertainments: going to the beach, reading some books and visiting different places.
ReplyDeleteOverall, we can notice that the graph called “Reading books” was much higher than the others. This is especially noticeable with tourists from China, who read, in comparison with Turkish and Brazilian tourists (they have the same figures, halve less than Chinese tourists), twice as much, namely 8 hours. By comparison, Chinese tourists show a downward trend if we talk about the “at the beach” graph: they reached 3 hours per day, unlike Brazilian tourists, whose increased they numbers to the highest point of 6 hours per day. As regards American tourists, we can see that this group reached a pick of 3 hours per day in “visiting places” activity, Interestingly, that Turkish tourists had the same figures and numbers of Chinese tourists was falling gradually to 1 hours per day.
Summing up, all trends are fluctuating, but has a number of similar figures in some graphs. All tourists prefer different activities, Chinese and American choose reading a book and Turkish and Brazilian select going to the beach
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The essay is well-done with cleared structure, a variety of linking words, on the contrary some mistakes are crucial. Pay your attention to the usage of past tenses, possessive pronouns and plural forms.
DeleteThe bar chat provides information about the amount of hours every day that people from four various countries spent doing activities while they were on vacation in Greece in August 2019. They were devoting their free time to several entertainments: going to the beach, reading some books and visiting different places.
Overall, we can notice that the bar called “Reading books” was much higher than the others. This was especially noticeable with tourists from China, who read, in comparison with Turkish and Brazilian tourists (they have the same figures, halve less than Chinese tourists), twice as much, namely 8 hours. By comparison, Chinese tourists shoed a downward trend if we talked about the “at the beach” bar : they reached 3 hours per day, unlike Brazilian tourists, who increased their numbers to the highest point of 6 hours per day. As regarding to American tourists, we could see that this group reached a pick of 3 hours per day in “visiting places” activity, Interestingly, that Turkish tourists had the same figures and the number of Chinese tourists was falling gradually to 1 hour per day.
Summing up, all trends are fluctuating, on the contrary has a number of similar figures in some graphs. All tourists prefer different activities, Chinese and American choose reading a book and Turkish and Brazilian select going to the beach