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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide, while others feel, that the answer lies in food aid.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It goes without saying that now, in this day and age, there is a huge problem with the amount of food in certain countries. This problem is especially relevant for low-income countries. In today's world there is a division into classes in society, where someone have everything, while others suffer from hunger. People are divided in their opinion regarding the problem of hunger and its solution. In this essay we will examine both perspectives before reaching a concrete decision.
ReplyDeleteMany support the view that education will help to solve the problem of lack of food in destitute countries. And it sounds reasonable: according to statistics, areas where a lot of attention and money is given to education, such as Great Britain, the USA, the level of starvation in the states as a whole is minimal, about 2% of the total population. A high level of education directly affects the number of people willing to employment in mentally challenging jobs. By creating the necessary conditions for labour, namely high wages, a comfortable place and flexible schedule, people will go to work and thereby develop the country, reducing the level of hunger and poverty. Apart from that, others believe that food aid can be a solution to this problem. According to information on this issue, in 2023, food-stamp to the Third world countries had positive effects and reduced hunger in certain areas by 1.5%. Direct food assistance helps residents of poor states to receive food immediately, without a long process of studying and earning money. However, often the amount of such food is very small and a person has no right to choose in this issue.
From my point of view on this issue is that both opinions should be implemented simultaneously. If you do each action separately, maybe there will be no such impact. Education is important not only in the topic of this issue, but also in general, if we talk about poverty and hunger, because education is the first thing you need to get out of this standard of living. But to improve the learning process in these countries, you need a lot of time and money, effort and desire of locals. So the method with food aid can be more relevant than ever in conjunction with improving the level of education, because getting food in this way is a cheaper, faster and easier way to solve the problem of lack of food for a certain time.
By Diana
The essay adequately addresses both views on tackling world hunger, showing understanding of the complexities involved. The essay is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, with clear transitions between paragraphs. The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some expressions could be more precise and sophisticated. The use of vocabulary is generally accurate and appropriate. The grammar is accurate and the range of structures is sufficient. Minor grammatical errors are present, but they do not impede understanding.
DeleteIt goes without saying that now, in this day and age, there is a huge problem with the amount of food in certain countries. This problem is especially relevant for low-income ones. In today's world, there is a division into classes in society, where some have everything, while others suffer from hunger. People are divided in their opinions regarding the problem of famine and its solution. In this essay, we will examine both perspectives before reaching a concrete decision.
Many support the view that education will help to solve the problem of lack of food in destitute countries. And it sounds reasonable: according to statistics, in areas where a lot of attention and money are given to education, such as Great Britain and the USA, the level of starvation in those states as a whole is minimal, about 2% of the total population. A high level of education directly affects the number of people willing to employ in mentally challenging jobs. By creating the necessary conditions for labour, namely high wages, a comfortable workplace, and a flexible schedule, people will go to work and thereby develop the country, reducing the level of hunger and poverty. Apart from that, others believe that food aid can be a solution to this problem. According to information on this issue, in 2023, food contributions to the Third World countries had positive effects and reduced hunger in certain areas by 1.5%. Direct food assistance helps residents of poor states to receive food immediately, without a long process of studying and earning money. However, often the amount of such food is very small, and a person has no right to choose regarding this field.
From my point of view, both opinions should be implemented simultaneously. If you do each action separately, perhaps, there will not be such an impact. Education is important not only in terms of this matter but also in general, if we talk about poverty and hunger, as tuition is the first thing you need to get out of this standard of living. On the contrary, to improve the learning process in these lands, a lot of time and investments, efforts, and the desire of locals should be taken into consideration. So this approach with food aid can be more relevant than ever in connection with increasing an education level, because getting food in this way is a cheaper, faster, and easier solution to the problem of lack of food for a limited time.