A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop?
Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task to write at least 250 words.
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ReplyDeleteNowadays, we cant imagine kid, who does not play toys. There are plethora of ways how parents can influence on the development of child. One of them is presenting gifts.
ReplyDeleteI strongly opine that computer will be the best present for kids. It gives them a huge amount of facilities for development, relaxing and studying. One of the most useful opportunity is searching the internet, because using internet horizons kids recognize information about the whole world. The other important facility is playing video games, which can significantly improve huge amount of skills: strategic thinking, reaction, communicative skills, etc. Overall, computer is perfect item for the people's development, but for some families it can be expensive.
What concerns me, I would present puzzles for a child. Puzzles have many benefits for the kid's development. They improve skills, such as intellection and planning. Moreover, they develop communicative experience, when child works in a group of people. Finally, puzzles is a great gift for kids, that is available to everyone.
Summarizing, one of the most significant variant how parents can impact on the child's evolution is presenting gives, which develop quantity of skills and give useful experience, that they can apply in life. Depending on budget, the best options might be a computer and puzzles.
Pretty good! The essay is well-structured, but you will be penalised for the lack of words. In such types of essays it is a good idea to write not only about benefits, but about disadvantages as well. Pay closer attention to the use of articles.
DeleteNowadays, we cannot imagine a kid, who does not play with toys. There is a plethora of ways how parents can influence the development of a child. One of them is presenting gifts.
I strongly opine that a computer or a laptop will be the best present for kids. It gives them a huge amount of facilities for development, relaxing and studying. One of the most useful opportunities is searching the internet, because by using internet resources kids recognize information about the whole world. Though, the time the child spends on the internet must be limited and regulated by parents in order not to do a lot of harm to a kid's mental state. The other important facility is playing video games, which can significantly improve huge amount of skills: strategic thinking, reaction, communicative skills, etc. On the other side, it is reasonable to keep an eye on the content of the game so as not to provoke too much violence and cruelty in kid's behaviour. Overall, computer is a perfect item for the people's evolution, on the contrary for some families it can be expensive.
What concerns me, I would present a child with puzzles. They have a number of benefits for the kid's progress. They improve skills, such as intelligence and planning. Moreover, they develop communicative experience, when a child works in a group of people. Finally, puzzles is a great gift for kids, that is available for everyone.
Summarizing, one of the most significant variant how parents can impact the child's evolution is presenting gifts, which develops quantity of skills and give useful experience, that they can apply in life. Depending on the budget, the best options might be a computer and puzzles.
Children’s achievements at learning may affect the whole of their future lives. Consequently,from my point of view, the best thing parents can do for them is to surround themselves with an appropriate environment. Furthermore, they should pay attention to the gifts that can contribute to a child’s development.
ReplyDeleteI suppose, if i had a chance to present something to a kid, it would be a robot. There are a plethora of reasons why this is my choice, so I'll give them in the following paragraphs in order to support my answer.
At first, what concerns child advancement, there is a huge variety of ways to implement it. For instance, a kid can get the information about anything he wants from the robot, either with the help of a special computer monitor embedded in it or through communication. Owing to the interaction between the child and robot, there is a possibility to improve not only knowledge in diverse spheres of life, but social skills of the user too.
Secondly, the robot can become a friend to his owner. As long as it is an artificial intelligence, sometimes there can be additional functions that refer to entertainment. It means that a kid can do his hobbies or sports in concert with his mechanic mate. I consider this kind of friendship to be quite exotic and engaging at the same time. The robot will never hurt you or let you down unless it doesn't have consciousness as we do.
To sum up, I would like to mention the priority of education nowadays. In view of the fact that we live in a rapidly developing world, I believe that the gifts for advancement should match the time we live in to help the child adapt to a permanent self-development.
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Good job! The essay is well-structured with introduction, supporting paragraphs and conclusion. The usage of appropriate linking words makes the essay logical and varied. A variety of complex and simple sentences adds points. The ideas used in the essay are relevant and give specific examples.All in all the essay meets the criteria.
DeleteChildren’s achievements at learning may affect the whole of their future lives. Consequently, from my point of view, the best thing parents can do for them is to surround themselves with an appropriate environment. Furthermore, they should pay attention to the gifts that can contribute to child’s development.
I suppose, if i had a chance to present something to a kid, it would be a robot. There are a plethora of reasons for my choice, subsequently I'll give them in the following paragraphs in order to support my answer.
At first, what concerns child advancement, there is a huge variety of ways to implement it. For instance, a kid can get the information about anything he wants from the robot, either with the help of a special computer monitor embedded in it or through communication. Owing to the interaction between the child and a robot, there is a possibility to improve not only knowledge in diverse spheres of life, on the contrary social skills of the user too.
Secondly, the robot can become a friend to his owner. As long as it is an artificial intelligence, sometimes there can be additional functions that refer to entertainment. It means that a kid can do his hobbies or sports accompanied by his mechanic mate. I consider this kind of friendship to be quite exotic and engaging at the same time. The robot will never hurt you or let you down unless it doesn't have consciousness as we do.
To sum up, I would like to mention the priority of education nowadays. In view of the fact that we live in a rapidly developing world, I believe that the gifts for advancement should match the time we live in to help the child adapt to a permanent self-development.