IELTS Writing Task 1: Bar Chart 3

 

IELTS Writing Tip

It is important that you support the information with accurate numbers (data) when completing  IELTS Writing Task 1 

Assuming one sentence contains around 10 to 15 words, we can estimate

 that your description of the bar chart will consist of about 10 to 12 

sentences. Now we can assign each sentence with a specific task:

• One sentence for the introduction.
• Two sentences using superlatives.
• A sentence with a comparison. Make comparisons where relevant.
• A sentence grouping two data points to show similarity (for example, you might include a brief description showing a gradual decrease in two different areas).
• A sentence noting an exception to an overall trend.
• A sentence describing some data in an advanced manner, using complex sentence structure.
• A sentence describing relevant data using simple structure.
• Two sentences for summary and conclusion.

Avoid listing every single data point; instead use your own words to describe the key information from the chart/graph. 

Avoid mixing formats: for example, don't mix decimals with estimations in the same sentence.

Check whether there is a date on the bar chart - you may need to use the past tense.

Make note of general trends, particularly upward or downward trends that can be highlighted in your own words. 

After you have successfully written out your description with all of the information you want to include, go over it and replace some simpler words with more academic vocabulary – this will help you achieve a high score. For example, try replacing "big" with "most significant". 

Check that your text is error-free. Review carefully to see if all your sentences are grammatically correct. 

Make sure that the data you have described is correct - that you have not made a mistake with a category or labels. 

Review for the correct use of connectors and linking words. 

Practise with different bar graphs/pie charts to improve especially with a range of values (percentages, kilos, miles, dollars). 

Review the superlatives - highest, lowest, most expensive, biggest difference - these are essential if you want to effectively describe bar charts. 

The fastest way to improve is to get feedback on your work. You can also check another model bar graph answer for comparison. 

Don't forget to check your word count. Make sure your piece is another too brief nor too wordy and detailed.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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