The Annual Earnings of Three Bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.
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You can describe changes using adjective and nouns. Most of the vocabulary is the same, but you need to learn the adjective and noun forms.
There was a considerable rise in the income of Amandine Bakery.
The income of Amandine Bakery saw/experienced/witnessed a considerable rise.
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The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph presents information about the yearly income of three bakehouses in 200-2010.
ReplyDeleteAt first glance, it can be seen that all lines are not sustainable and intersect during some specified periods.
At the outset of the period, in 2000, all of the lines took different numbers of earnings. Mary Bakeshop had the highest one, counted with 80000 dollars, while Bolo Cakery had the lowest one, 20000 dollars, and Amandine Bakery had somewhere in the middle. But over time, things have changed.
Starting with Mary Bakeshop, the amount of income slightly increased and decreased sequently, but, in 2006, it started to decrease dramatically, intersecting other lines of bakeries, and ended up at the lowest point in 2010. However, Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery made financial growth, or more precisely, the first one made a hole out of stability and the second one had a small loss, but came to growth by the end.
To sum up, all the bakeries received changes in their incomes. But Amandine Bakery has achieved great success by keeping earnings at the same level and gradually making a growth.
The graph demonstrate information about the annual salary of three bakeries: ''Amandiny Bakery'', ''Mary Bakeshop'', ''Bolo Cakery'', which locate in Calgary. The graph provides information for 10 years.
ReplyDeleteIn the beginning of 2000 ''Mari Bakeshop'' had a small increase in annual earnings, which was interrupted by a strong drop with little correction from $80,000 to $40,000 for the period of ten years.
''Amandiny Bakery'' had a huge difference from competitors that has showed a small fluctuation since 2000 to 2005, but than has rocketed from nearly 58000$ to 105000$ p.a. for the period of 5 years.
One year income of "Bolo Cakery'' has present high magnification from 20000$ to about 65000$ and included the slight flactuaction since 2003 to 2006.
Summing up, ''Amandiny Bakery'' and ''Bolo Cakery'' have showed good magnification by the period of 10 years, ''Mari Bakeshop'' has demonstrated sharp doubling from 80000$ to 40000$.
The graph demonstrates information about the annual salary of three bakeries: ''Amandine Bakery'', ''Mary Bakeshop'', ''Bolo Cakery'', which are located in Calgary. The graph provides information within 10 years.
DeleteAt the beginning of 2000 ''Mari Bakeshop'' had a small increase in annual earnings, which was interrupted by a strong drop with minor corrections from $80,000 to $40,000 for the period of ten years, while within the period of three years 2008-2010 the profit of this bakeshop stayed sustainable without any progress.
''Amandine Bakery'' had a huge difference from competitors that had shown a tiny fluctuation from 2000 to 2007, but then rocketed from nearly 58000$ to 105000$ per year for the period of 5 years.
The annual income of "Bolo Cakery'' presented high magnification from 20000$ to about 65000$ and included the slight fluctuation from 2003 to 2006.
Summing up, ''Amandine Bakery'' and ''Bolo Cakery'' showed good magnification by the period of 10 years, ''Mari Bakeshop'' demonstrated sharp doubling from 80000$ to 40000$.
The graph demonstrates information about the annual income of three bakeries. It was a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010.
ReplyDeleteAt first, the most influential Bakery was a "Mari Bakeshop". Moreover, it was the most popular Bakery in 2000. On the contrary, in 2004 started a crucial fall. Therefore, it was less popular in 2010.
What about the Amandine Bakery, the figure remained stable from 2000 to 2005, the benefit was about 55000$. In addition to, the Amandine Bakery rose sharply in 2007, and reached a pick in 2010. It was an immense gap between the Mari Bakeshop and Bolo Cakery.
Regarding the Bolo Cakery, the figure rose significantly in 2002, the budget was about 40000$. Thus, the Bolo Bakery levelled off only in 2010, and the annual income was about 63000$.
So, the biggest income was in Amandine Bakery. Besides, it was the most popular in 2010. Unfortunately, a considerable fall was in Mari Bakeshop, the yearly income was 40000$. Despite, the Bolo Bakery took the second place between Mari Bakeshop and Amandine Bakery, the budget was about 63000$.
By Aleksandra.
The graph demonstrates information about the annual income of three bakeries measured in dollars. It was a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010.
DeleteAt first, the most influential Bakery was "Mari Bakeshop". Moreover, it was the most popular Bakery in 2000. On the contrary, in 2004 a crucial fall happened. Therefore, it was less popular in 2010. The reduction of sales slowed down in 2008, since then the revenue reached a plateau.
What about the Amandine Bakery, the figure remained stable from 2000 to 2005, the benefit was approximately $55000. In addition, the revenue of Amandine Bakery rose sharply in 2007, and reached a pick in 2010. It was an immense gap between the Mari Bakeshop and Bolo Cakery.
Regarding the Bolo Cakery, the figures rose significantly in 2002, the budget was about $40000. Thus, the Bolo Bakery levelled off only in 2010, and the annual income was about $63000.
Consequently, the biggest revenue was in Amandine Bakery. Besides, it was the most popular one in 2010. both bakeries, Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery, showed an upward trend in the period from 2006 to 2010.Unfortunately, a considerable fall happened in Mari Bakeshop, the yearly profit was $40000. Despite the fact that the Bolo Bakery took the second place between Mari Bakeshop and Amandine Bakery, the budget was close to $63000.